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Palimpsest by Catherynne Valente - Mythpunk Book Review

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Intro:

Palimpsest is a portal fantasy novel written by Catherynne Valente in 2009. The work received the Lambda award. The symbolic title refers to a manuscript that has been effaced to allow it to be written over, with moral assumptions being that which was erased in this case. The book addresses themes of female mobility within a constructivist mindset and the tentative relationship between hedonism and finding meaning.

Although the book has absurdist and magical realist elements, Valente classifies her work as mythpunk, a postmodern cyberpunk derivative that uses folklore re-interpretation to undermine or reexamine traditionally-held social and moral assumptions. Valente stated in an interview with Strange Horizons (Vanderhooft, 2011), “I've always considered the appending of -punk to whatever other word to indicate that X is not merely being explored or ruminated upon, but in some sense broken, harmed, and put back together again with safety pins and patches."

Plot:


The book takes the perspective of four main characters, Sei, November, Ludovico, and Oleg, and many secondary ones. Non-animate objects may also become characters through personification and anthropomorphism, including: a house, trains, train rails, and more abstractly, effigized memories. Even the City of Palimpsest talks to the reader. The presence of oracles and god-like figures is remnant of the best sections of Bone Dance by Emma Bull (another mythpunk book).

I am…like a machine…made out of all the things you remember about your childhood.

The protagonists have all suffered a familial loss through death or abandonment and are in a vulnerable state of sorrow, longing for reunion. While much of this loss resulted from their character flaws, there was also a random quality to it; it’s implied one relationship ended because the woman didn’t own a yellow raincoat. The loss pulls them to reckless pleasure seeking. By committing sudden acts of hedonism, they’re transported to another realm, The City of Palimpsest, on a train that barrels down a track of its own volition, wild and outside of their control.

She would seek out passage on her train, and all these fleshly tickets would fall to her feet, used and pale.

The citizens of Palimpsest are effigies of their real-world counterparts, shelled humans, even memories of loves long lost. Palimpsest can only be accessed at night, and outsiders aren't allowed to stay, motivating the characters to explore its mysteries so they can reside there permanently. Upon return to the real world, they're despondent and desperate to get back, experiencing the mercurial falloff of someone going off the deep end while on the rebound after a breakup. One of the keys to living there forever is to reconnect with their primal nature by replacing one of their body parts with a lower animal's, though Valente isn’t trying to place moral judgment here. She writes that what happens in a dream doesn’t matter, and this dreamworld lacks meaning just as much as the real one, for like the real world it has only absurdity as its foundation. In The City of Palimpsest the absurdity is physically manifested, while in the real world it’s manifested in the perception of the characters.

People who visit Palimpsest are seen as immigrants so the story may also be viewed as a story about how wealthier countries judge outsiders and the challenges when assimilating to a new culture, but this interpretation is secondary. The amount of time developing the politics during the discussion of the great war is far less than that spent developing the psychological, romantic subplots.

World Building:

The world building is fantastic. In Palimpsest, tenements are built on stilts like spider silk. Children are blank, formless until they go to finishing school around mid-puberty. They aren’t reunited with parents and can’t have family ties. Girls tie their hair together to make fishing nets and float upon the sea. The world building also makes postmodern commentary, such as in the following excerpt discussing how we vainly accumulate knowledge because we can't overcome our mortality.

In the remote west are creatures whose body is that of a Greek book with a spine of wood and glues the matter of which is like unto the blood of a man. In rage does the beast snap its covers, gnash its chapters, and should a man attempt to make end of such a one, it will spew forth the substance of its life in the form of pages without end, and he shall be overwhelmed entirely by the copious waste of the brute, and thus does the beast ransom itself from death.

A great war is mentioned that was based on moral conflict and fidelity. There’s a strong “golden age” feel to the book where this would-be Eden used to be freely accessible before empires were erected. Oddly, the hedonistic palimpsest that fulfills desires seems more ritualistic and orderly than the real world though, with directly stipulated expectations for behavior right down to the direction one’s rings face, based on their mood. Palimpsest cuts out the foreplay that is mostly manipulation anyway.

The citizens of Palimpsest are effigies of their real-world counterparts, shelled humans, even memories of loves long lost. When returning from this surreal city, the protagonists are despondent and languished and desperate to get back. This represents the mercurial falloff of being on the “rebound” after a breakup. Valente writes that what happens in a dream doesn’t matter, and this dreamworld lacks meaning just as much as the real one, for like the real world it has only absurdity as its foundation. In The City of Palimpsest the absurdity is physically manifest, while in the real world it’s in people's perceptions.

Visitors of Palimpsest are seen as immigrants so the story may also be viewed as a story about how wealthier countries judge outsiders and their experiences assimilating to a new culture, but this interpretation is secondary. The amount of time developing the politics during the discussion of the great war is far less than that spent developing the psychological, romantic subplots.


surreal dream city in the clouds skyscrapers


Theme - Female Mobility:

Female mobility is a recurring theme throughout, and it’s powerfully expressed, with sexual repression being one of the locks holding people in place.

He gives me sapphires every night; he pierces my arms with a long needle and hangs me with jewels until I cannot move for the weight.

If she wants to circumnavigate fairyland. It’s not so hard. She just has to kill a few thousand bees. Bees who danced with her, and protected her, and walked down avenues with her like a gentleman suitor.

The train needed her. She had to keep up. Had to go faster…she felt as though the train crouched by her even in the daytime, hiding behind clouds and temples, waiting…

(In Palimpsest) The manufacture of ladders is a highly prized skill…The first is the Rung of Honest Labor, and the last is the Rung of the Salt of Heaven. Between, each ladderer may stack his own path.

Take her what coins you have, she will bite them to know their worth and count them into memory, which is finite and bounded by her own bones. A rib counts for a hundred, vertebrae twenty-five each…and neither you nor I will ever see her priceless heart…Almudena uses the map of her flesh to recall deposits…

Each morning, Philomena places her latest map on the windowsill…it opens along its own creases, its corners like wings, and takes halting flight, flapping over the city with susurring strokes. It folds itself, origami-exact, in midair: it has papery eyes, inky feathers, vellum claws.
maps

Characterization:

Characters’ perceptions are defined by their work, from the locksmith who dreams of unlocking his own secret world upon a lover whose key he holds, while secretly wondering if two locks might ever get together, to a book binder obsessed with the hidden press that cartographs the pleasured path to heaven upon the back of his loved one's bare leg. Their work is imbued in everything they think.

The sentence, its mere shape in his mouth like an old, fattened fig, exhausted him. He had stamped it with his tongue like a press, copy after copy, into the hands of everyone he met.

Keys did not really fascinate him, though he collected them as well, matching them carefully, not to the lock that was made for them, modern to modern, brass to brass, keycard to slot, as a common locksmith might, but to the ones he felt they yearned for, deep in their pressed metal hearts.
locks and keys
The characters rock, and even side characters like Lyudmila are fascinating, silently asking how much loyalty can a dead person expect from a loved one when her entire self-worth is tied to him. Oleg's an awesome character, but November's my favorite. She’s a beekeeper obsessed with making lists. She wants to create her own new verb from a string of nouns but has yet to be able to, showing her desire to escape this world. Like her bees, she is stuck in a hive, but her’s is nearly empty. The bees all want her attention, but they’re all the same bee despite having different names, showing how she views coquettish men. The bees also represent the anxious swarm of her thoughts, each one representing joy or rage, and the list-making is also evidence of this anxiety since it is often associated with OCD.

November’s chagrined to share her lists. She fears the world’s judgment for what she has done that she considers to be wrong, losing pride until her self-imaged is impacted. Then, she gives in to what she considers to be sinful, fulfilling the label of being a sinner. Like the others, she is marked with a black tattoo indicating a portion of the city map, basically a scarlet letter. Finally, she has to eat a meal of herself to consume who she used to be in order to move on and take higher roles in society, but these roles require sacrifices, such as having her face be scarred or losing two fingers. She experiences the world of pleasure, but loses her beauty in the eyes of others by doing so.

(The bees) have not made a queen in all their lives, they have no jelly, being all wire and glass and infinitesimal engines.
cocktail sign

Overall:

The writing style has strong use of vocabulary and long sentences, and is absolutely exceptional, calling in the best of Charles Dickens' mastery mixed with a postmodern, absurdist vibe. Though it’s mythpunk, it oddly lacks the punk tone that her novel Speak Easy has. Present tense works surprisingly well for this many characters with backstories.

The story and tone of Palimpsest reminds me of Haruki Murakami’s works meets Ink by Hal Duncan meets The Scarlet Letter, with a touch of The Good Place and Bataille's Story of the Eye. The occasional use of second person is effective, lacking the gimmicky approach most authors take. The reader feels like a confidant during these sections, privileged to the emotional undercurrents of the city.

The metaphors and extended metaphors are perfect, and even though they’re constant, Valente pulls them off with a finesse that would be jarring in the hands of a lesser author. Color is important to symbolism as well, from the sultry reds to the natural greens based on the character and scene.

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The ending is purposefully open-ended, which, though it may be less satisfying this way, begs the question as to exactly how the world of Palimpsest would be more palatable than the real world, if at all. Palimpsest’s ideas of sharing the woman sharing the wine is similar to how certain classes were expected to behave in Plato’s Republic, but Valente steers away from trying to create a utopia or a dystopia, which is refreshing. In postmodern sense, Valente doesn’t morally judge the world of pleasure to be better or worse than the real world, though she shows the drawbacks of living such a one-track life and her statement is, if someone is going to skirt the moral boundaries of society, they can only thrive as a group.

Once you’ve…ridden the little red rain, then you can sort of see other people who’ve done it, too.

A fantastic book and one of the best I’ve read! Fans of Kobo Abe and Haruki Murakami should flock to this one. For those wanting a lighter hearted read, the comical Space Opera will fit your bill, or her more classically-toned fairy tale series, where readers will find recurring ideas such as September, a character referenced in Palimpsest, the Green Wind, and the idea of the innocent, formless child.

References:

Vanderhooft, Joselle. ( 2011). Mythpunk: An Interview With Catherynne Valente. Strange Horizons. Available
here.

Resources:

Vocabulary list to study before reading: Susurring, salience, craven, solicitous, quisling, profligate, effigy, bucolic, execrable, ensconce, capacious, commodious, swarthy, chagrin, irascible, languor, lassitude, demur, equipoise, stalwart, abate, tenacious, and coquettish.

Finally, for a casual introduction to hedonism in plain speech,
see this article from Quartz.